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Commentary On John Donne's: The Good-Morrow (First Stanza)

I wonder, by my troth, what thou and I

Did, till we loved? Were we not weaned till then?

But sucked on country pleasures, childishly?

Or snorted we in the Seven Sleepers’ den?

’Twas so; but this, all pleasures fancies be.

If ever any beauty I did see,

Which I desired, and got, ’twas but a dream of thee.

And now good-morrow to our waking souls,

Which watch not one another out of fear;

For love, all love of other sights controls,

And makes one little room an everywhere.

Let sea-discoverers to new worlds have gone,

Let maps to other, worlds on worlds have shown,

Let us possess one world, each hath one, and is one.

My face in thine eye, thine in mine appears,

And true plain hearts do in the faces rest;

Where can we find two better hemispheres,

Without sharp north, without declining west?

Whatever dies, was not mixed equally;

If our two loves be one, or, thou and I

Love so alike, that none do slacken, none can die.

Source: The Norton Anthology of Poetry Third Edition (1983)

John Donne is an 16th century English poet. He is considered the pre-eminent representative of the metaphysical poets.

"The Good-Morrow" is a poem published in his 1633 collection Songs and Sonnets. It is one of his earliest works.

The poem opens with a rhetorical question 'I wonder, by my troth'. This stop after 'wonder' and the word 'troth' suggests the seriousness and profondity of the question. It also elicits the subject of the poem, which is the relationship between the voice and his lover.

In the next line, the emphasis on the punctuation after 'did' invites audience to think along with the voice. It also slows the line and give a sense of contemplation. The following word 'weaned' suggests that the voice once loved like a chld. This is confirmed in the later line 'childishly', the point of 'sucked on country pleasures' enhances the simple delight and inuendo of the relationship. On the other hand, 'country pleasures' connotes sexual pleasure.

Sibilance in 'seven sleeper's den' evokes soporific effect which allows the image childishness to be recalled.

The voice then concludes with 'twas so;', again the punctuation marks shows affirmative, it identify that the 'all pleasures fancy be' is what life was before they are together.

In the last two lines of the first stanza, the voices expresses that all past relationships lead to her by 'but a dream of thee'. The instrumental effect in 'got, twas' pulls out the words and adds frankness and honesty to the voice's declaration of strong love.

Overall, the first stanza creates the sense that the past leads to the present. It also sets up the thematic idea of a childish past leading to a honest and profound relationship.

Mingly

毛毛球球 发表于 2014-6-8 22:37

写了两天英语论文的人看到蚯蚓字都想哭了

很讨厌论文 %66:}

毛毛球球

写了两天英语论文的人看到蚯蚓字都想哭了

Mingly

%132:}呜呜呜~~好吧,我错了

素描时光
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Mingly

OOOOO 发表于 2014-4-25 10:07

会听不会讲也觉得很奇怪。。。的说(ー`´ー)。。。

我以前也觉得很奇怪,但是现在比较多人都这样没关系啦

OOOOO

Mingly 发表于 2014-4-25 09:56

有时是会觉得很尴尬。但还好啦,会听就可以了。

会听不会讲也觉得很奇怪。。。的说(ー`´ー)。。。

Mingly

OOOOO 发表于 2014-4-24 22:37

是的呢诶_(:з」∠)_。。。主要也是没有下决心学一学_(:з」∠)_。。。

有时是会觉得很尴尬。但还好啦,会听就可以了。

OOOOO

Mingly 发表于 2014-4-24 19:23

那倒也是,先找朋友练练口

是的呢诶_(:з」∠)_。。。主要也是没有下决心学一学_(:з」∠)_。。。

Mingly

OOOOO 发表于 2014-4-24 19:05

主要还是要说吧。。。说多了才能会呢诶。。。但是不会的话又怕说错

那倒也是,先找朋友练练口=1115=

OOOOO

Mingly 发表于 2014-4-24 18:09

现在,好多人都是会听不会说粤语。 没关系啦,慢慢来

主要还是要说吧。。。说多了才能会呢诶。。。但是不会的话又怕说错

Mingly

OOOOO 发表于 2014-4-24 13:59

真不错_(:з」∠)_。。。虽然我在深圳待了很久。。。不过还是不会讲粤语。。。 ...

现在,好多人都是会听不会说粤语。 =787= 没关系啦,慢慢来

Mingly

OOOOO 发表于 2014-4-24 13:59

真不错_(:з」∠)_。。。虽然我在深圳待了很久。。。不过还是不会讲粤语。。。 ...

现在,好多人都是会听不会说粤语。 =787= 没关系啦,慢慢来

OOOOO

Mingly 发表于 2014-4-24 13:55

广州哦~ 现在在悉尼

真不错_(:з」∠)_。。。虽然我在深圳待了很久。。。不过还是不会讲粤语。。。

Mingly

OOOOO 发表于 2014-4-24 11:12

是香港的同学还是国外的。。。?

广州哦~~36@ 现在在悉尼~58@

OOOOO

Mingly 发表于 2014-4-24 08:22

中文比较难耶,好吧。谢谢。

好可爱好可爱

是香港的同学还是国外的。。。?

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